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OMG I THINK IM BACK

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hey guys <3
well ive disapperd for a really long time, i know i know.
i guess im back now, but im not drawing on my tablet anymore, its not working. Llama-Emoji-08-(Crying)
do you think i can upload drawing i drew on a paper? would itll be fine? :< 


love, anna. <33333 
Llama-Emoji-12-(Left-and-Right) 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello there...
Lovely piece of work. I'm sorry if any of this comes off as rude, it really is a great piece of work (23049304932 better than anything I could do), I just want to help you improve and become even better c: Anyway... I hope this critique helps

Vision- 3.5/5

It looks great, but there are little things that are really dragging the overall look down. Something is a bit off with the legs, particularly in her right (our left) knee. The angling is a little funny, but it still looks good. In addition, I'd say her arms are probably a tiny bit too short. I'd say you'd likely see at least the tips of the fingers going past the skirt, but I'm not 100% sure on this. The colors look really good together and I like that there's NOT an equal amount of each color. Although it's a little sketchy, I'm sure that's intentional so I'm not going to address that. All in all, it looks really good



Originality- 2.5/5

It's really cute, but I'm going to be really honest... the picture in general, is boring. There isn't too much that stands out about it. The pose is very basic, and doesn't really convey much of anything; a picture usually looks much better and is much more original when the pose conveys either an emotion or an action. It's ridiculously easy to find pictures on dA with basic standing poses, so not much originality there. The character is however, pretty original, so props to you for that!



Technique- 4.5/5

The anatomy is reasonably good, and you seem to have a pretty good idea of where shadows go... clean lines and coloring inside said lines would have made it better, but since i'm pretty sure it was meant to be sketchy, I wont factor that in too much. Nice work



Impact- 3

With the pose being so simple, and not really having much of an expression, it's not the kind of picture that leaves a lasting impact on someone. It still does look good though... just it has room to improve. Remember, a picture that gives the viewer something to connect to is going to be memorable....



STILL THOUGH, this is really good...better than I could do!
Sorry if anything came off as harsh, I just want to help!
It's really cute!!
Nice work, and have a nice day